Mend Your Diet

Anorexia..........?

I really want an opinion on my poem. can you tell me what you think please be honest. Beautiful Anorixia you take a strole down my mind. You remind me of what you did to me, you told me you were kind. Beautiful Anorixia gliding down my brain. With a single look you can feel my pain. Beautiful Anorixia you leave tiny footprints in my head. If only i didnt listen to what you would have said. Beautiful Anorexia you are apprehensive and frail. Looking for a friend you sit alone to wale. Beautiful Anorexia your tears will finally be dried. For this littel girl should have run to hide. Beautiful Anorexia you see her sliding down. You were the only one that, that girl had around. Beautiful Anorexia you brought her to the brink. For others have now seen how much she has shrink. Beautiful Anorexia you are fighting now. To keep the friend that you once had but then had once pushed down. Beautiful Anorexia you are to frail to fight. You must part your long time friend and leave into the night. Beautiful Anorexia you see her gain her strength. Soon the pain and suffering will distance into length. Beautiful Anorexia you take one last visit to the place you once called home. This girl will never let you visit agian, now your all alone. Beautiful Anorexia soon you'll find a friend. And soon someday you'll bring her to The End. im 15.....................

Public Comments

1. It is very over powering it has quite an effect and I can tell that this poem is not just a poem to you. It's really good and think the realistic struggle this person is over coming is amazing.
2. very good hun, it's deep. I like it alot. I wrote one about cutting, I will share it with you, i have not shared it with anyone. You told me you wanted to be my friend You told me we were best friends You told me you will always be there for me You told me you would never tell anyone my secret You told me that things would never change for us but what happend? What did i do wrong. I did not mean to hurt you. I'm sorry that i'm here, I just need alittle bet of help. I'm sorry please don't leave me. I wish I could change things. please still be my friend. I just hope you can get over this......I REALLY do. I wish I could get over mine, still trying too. But i think it's good hun. don't stop writting.
3. I think it's very expressive of what one feels when going through it. I don't know from personal experience, but I liked the poem. Very neat how you ended it.
4. That's really good. How old are you? And how long did it take you? Cos usually it takes poets ages to write something like that.
5. very impressive!!! i like your poem, its really beautiful and it reflect your deep thoughts, particularly the last two lines are so touchy and making complete sense of what you want to convey. Good keep it up! :-)
6. My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're 15? Have you been through the disease or battling it? Judging by your poem, you seem to have quite an amazing understanding of what its like having to cope with the horrible illness! Hope you're OK!!! I've never seen it described so accurately; I definitely couldn't when I thought Anorexia was my best friend! I met it when I was 16 and eventually told it to get stuffed when I was in my mid 20's. I'm 29 now, healthy and happy with propper friends I can trust! I absolutely love your poem, quite gob smacked by it really! You have an extraordinary talent with poetry! Never stop writing, I'd love to buy your book one day!
7. Ah, I used to be her friend too. We haven't talked since my freshman year of college and there really is not a day that goes by that I do not think about her. This poem seems like more of a letter to yourself. I think it's a good tool to keep and read when you might think about seeing her again. Excellent.